Comic

Review

The planning for the comic was the fastest part of the process, with the location development done within days, storyboard in weeks.
The slowest part was the making of the actual comic and script which is very slow going and still not finished.

Three act structure

Three act structure

Beginning: a man is held prisoner, he is tortured and interrogated by a strange man.

The captive escapes his binds

Middle:The captive roams the evil facility looking for a way out, running into henchmen along the way.

The captive is told of a way to escape by a 'air vent lurker'

End: The captive escapes the facility and discovers the truth behind his captors.

Mind Map

Treatment

Treatment from doctormike84

Location development

Area Development

The comic is mostly based in Area 51.

There are random rooms with white walls and have all different types of technology inside.

All the rooms are brightly lit

The room the hostage is fist in is the interrogation room

People with white lab coats are walking around every where

character development

Name: Dave Boddington
Gender: Male

Age: 25

Hobbies/Interests: likes to play computer games most of the time.
Race: Human (probably)
Role: right background government guy.
Biography: began government activities at 10 by arresting other players in Minecraft then deporting them to the nether, at 16 was recruited by the government and started work guarding important prisoners.

3 pitches

Comic pitch 1 for “the captive”

The comic will be about a man trying to escape from his captors, the comic will tell the story of his travels through the captor’s base of operations. The story is based in modern day time with a more cartoony and jokey approach. 

This comic will be appealing due to its high amount of humor.

Comic pitch 2 for “the land of ultrase”

The story of the comic follows the travels of a young man/woman who’s is searching for a way to recover his lost memories. It will be based in a fantasy medieval time

This comic would be appealing for it’s in depth story line and its detailed character development.

Comic pitch 3 for “children of the ark”

The story of this comic follows the lives of teenagers stranded on an international space station after a plague hits the stations population turning all its infected insane and in time die. It will be based in a sci-fi space age time.

This comic would be appealing due to it’s in depth story line and huge background story.

writers powerpoint